Old Toy,, Old Window,,

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  1. jaharris1001

    jaharris1001 No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    this was just as I found this,, an old toy that had looked like it was placed on an old window sill many years ago and forgotten,, shot taken from an abandoned house,,
    comments appreciated
    Thanks
    Jim

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    color version as well,, little different crop

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  2. tirediron

    tirediron Watch the Birdy! Staff Member Supporting Member

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    I think the B&W is appropriate for this image, but I'd like to see it with a little more black and white; right now it's very mid-tone rich with a lot of grey. I think high-contrast is the way to go on this one to punch up the visual impact. If you can, perhaps less of a crop? I think a little more of the surrounding area might not hurt either.
     
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    Works well in b/w. I like how there are lots of textures and lines in it.

    Well spotted!
     
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    I sort of like it better in black and white too. Something about it...I dunno what it is...
     

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