Old typewriter

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  1. Sergiozal

    Sergiozal TPF Noob!

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    Ok, this is my first post for serious critique.
    This picture was taken in an antiquarium lit by the natural light from one window.
    Camera: Canon A70
    Colors have been touched up in PS, because it looked too black in the original.

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  2. JonMikal

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    awesome capture! great composition and tone treatment; DOF is perfect IMO. :thumbup:
     
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    Christie Photo No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    I DO LIKE THIS! The broad window light an excellent choice.
     
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    terri Administrator Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Love it! :) Nice light, beautiful tone. I can't see anything I've had tried otherwise. So well done. :thumbup:
     
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    great shot really nice and sharp showing the letters and metal grain beautifully, nice dof.
     
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    chroix In Latin it's "spikius conius thingonius"

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    beauty
     
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    Fantastic. I don't really get the aquarium thing, but whatever you did it's great.

    What is not so great is the fact this is exactly the same kind of typewriter I learned to type on. And really depressing is hearing my music on oldies stations.
    I guess Depends are the next thing I have to look forward too.

    Rant aside, I love this image.:heart:
     
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    very nice... great use of graphic elements (lines and courves)... beautiful lighting. would be nice to see one with a smaller dept of field to create that still life mood we all love... but very nice indeed...
     
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    Oh, thank you all,
    I didn't know it was that good, although I liked it very much.
    Perhaps a smaller depth of field could work well, I agree, but it so far from my home now :(
     
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    That is absolutely gorgeous. Loads of character (hehehe), beautiful work.
     

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