Ominous birds eye view

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  1. rallysman

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    C&C please

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    i really like this photo. its a simple composition, but has direction. would like to see what it would look like with some textures and darkening PP.
     
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    I hate to be "That Guy" again, but here goes:
    Undersaturated
    Slightly out of focus
    Somethings happening to make the wood green and purple (I forget the technical name)

    But I like what you were going for. Nice composition. I think either the background or the subject should be a little brighter though..

    Mark
     
  4. rallysman

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    Thanks:) I'll keep playing around with it.

    No you don't!

    Thanks for the feedback:) This is what I need. I know this is far from perfect (and probably never will be) but I think this could be a cool shot.
     
  5. BrianLy

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    I really like but I think it would have been better if you zoom in more to the bird.
     
  6. DaevidClarke

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    SORRY! Just for fun....its like an emo album cover.

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  7. rallysman

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    Thanks, but I was out of zoom. I guess I could have cropped it tighter, but my lens is a bit soft @ 400mm
    I like it!
     
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    Convert to B&W, square crop, increase contrast.

    Good photo.
     
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    :thumbup:
     
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    great edit.
     
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    love the edit,first thing i thought was it need cropping.
     

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