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  1. JonMikal

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    thanks for looking
     
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    I really love the meaning behind it(reminds me of me at that age)

    But the fuzz of the bright areas throw me off a little. It looks a little too photoshopped. I would really like to see this photo with those things toned down a little.

    Great idea! :)
     
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    i agree somewhat with what littleman said. that is a terrific idea though. great job setting it up (or having good timing).
     
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    Nice composition and lighting, but yea, it's a little over photoshoped.
    --A
     
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    thanks guys. actually, the overexposed area is what i was going after to create the mood i wanted. this proves everyone doesnt like everything i like...oh my :lmao:
     
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    The soft-blur to me makes it look dream-like. I wonder what would happen if you were to add a subtle splash of color somewhere, (not on any one part of the photo, but more of a 'fog' if you will.)

    just my humble opinion
     
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    I like the diffuse glow, great photo!
     
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    I love the feel of the photo, if it wasn't exposed in that way, it would lose some meaning. I love it love it love it love it love it! Did I mention I love it? Great job!
     
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    Beautiful work Jon. However I must say that the 'glow' is a bit distracting for me as well. It would have been moe effective if the glow is spread all over the picture. JUST my personal opinion.

    Your son will be proud of this work! :thumbup:
     
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    I really like the glow and would not change a thing. I think you have reached perfection the way it is. At least in my eyes.

    :thumbsup:

    Eric
     
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    I like it. I am with Eric on this, I would not change anything.
     
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    Yep, I am with Airic and Canoncan, the picture has a good dreamy guality. Great title and story. If I were the owner of that guitar I would lock it up ;)
     

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