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  1. TheLogan

    TheLogan TPF Noob!

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    It rained for the first time in a while here, so I figured I'd shoot a little. just wanted to get some opinions.

    Much love!
    -Logan

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    Bitter Jeweler Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    The red X is too centered.
    Google the rule of thirds.
     
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    Red X? What red X? I've got a lovely question mark...
     
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    Bitter Jeweler Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    You linked to the page the image is on, rather than the image.

    [IMG ]http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4007/4609302285_1c6aabee70_b_d.jpg[ /IMG]
     
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    fixed it.
     
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    D-B-J Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    bitter is being harsh, i really like it.
     
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    Not big on flowers myself, but I would get rid of the blue. I think I would also crop most of the top to make it more rectangular.
     
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    Nice. Nice flower, nice bokeh. What lens did you use?
     
  9. TheLogan

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    I cropped out the blue and some of the top, c.cloud. Looks a lot better imo.

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    Dallmeyer: I used the Canon 85mm 1.8

    thanks guys:)
     
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    I'm a big fan of flowers myself, I think it is a beautiful photo.
     
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    wonderful, i love to see such beautiful nature!
     
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    Think you did real well on this one. I like it.
     

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