Discussion in 'Photography Beginners' Forum' started by Mazpro502, Jun 16, 2010.
meh... the subject is a bit bland, seems more snapshotish than photograph, like you showed up, were standing still, and snapped and moved on.
Lack of contrast in the BW, probably due to the excessive stuff in the background (alot of water, very vast, removes from subject)
Compared to your other thread, this is an improvement. It needs contrast, however.
I do like the edit one better.
Yes looks much better after the edit.
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