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  1. mom2eight

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    More practice with the kids today. Jewels was a great model!
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    I thought this one turned out good, any CC would be great. I'm still learning but I like the practice.
     
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    No replys, no CC????????? Oh well I thought it turned out good.
     
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    Great shot! The vignette is a bit heavy for my taste, though.
     
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    lovely boy....eager to be photographed.
     
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    Birdy thanks, I know some people dislike the vinette im always torn. Sometimes I think it helps add a pop to a picture, but maybe in this case I over did it.
    Gopal, this is my daughter. She was eager to have her picture taken. She usually doesn't photograph well so I was pleased with this one.
     
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    Very nice. i don't mind the vignette too much. The shot could maybe be a bit brighter imho. cute kid.
     
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    i like the framing and the expression of that kid.. love it!!!
     
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    Thanks,

    Its usually hard to get her to give a good expression thats natural. She would make a great model she is very tall and thin for her age although she eats like a cow!lol

    I trying to learn how to focus spot on for childrens photography with capturing they eyes. I think im getting better, but still practicing and learning.
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    Hi- you have a beautiful dd. =)

    for cc:

    1- the vignette is too much
    2- her skin looks a little orange to me and a tad blotchy
    3- I think you over dodged the whites of her eyes, which is more noticeable since you didn't also dodge her teeth.
    4- the top of her hood is blown and a tiny bit distracting
     
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    Farrah,

    Thanks for the CC. I didn't retouch her skin im not sure if I like that on children or not. Didn't think about the teeth whitening, but now that you say it I notice it. Her skin doesn't look orange on my monitor, she does have a darker complexion since she is Hispanic.
     
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    maybe I'm just so used to my pasty white kids? LOL
     

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