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  1. Christina

    Christina TPF Noob!

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    I was forbidden to take pictures right before my wedding as i tend to go overboard. I havent been out for about 3 months & a friend of mine said she would hang out with her fiancee and we could try some things.
    I know my lighting is yuck... im learning 2pm on the water isnt a good idea.
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  2. Sideburns

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    Nice shots...but that shirt is doing nothing for the bride.
     
  3. Christina

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    :) agreed. I keep trying to tell her flowy shirts would compliment better, and fiancee was less than happy to do photo's.
     
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    Any more C&C please?
     
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    JAX

    Anyway, here is what I have to say, being that you are a professional (or aspire to be), you should not take that from adults...not wanting to put on a decent shirt and a man that is too good to have his photos taken. But enough of that.

    The first one bothers me a tad because of all the white showing in her eyes. His lack of interest in all of the photos is disturbing and I believe ruins everything.

    When you have two people look off camera, make sure they are looking at the same thing.

    I personally don't like any of the shots but that really isn't your fault...some clients are just a pain to deal with. Try to shoot in the late afternoon or early morning...this will help with the harsh lighting in the photographs.

    #2 I would rather have seen them not kissing and maybe looking at each other or at the ground and off center...

    I don't know, but try again with new subjects!
     
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    Thank you for the honest thoughts
     

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