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Discussion in 'The Professional Gallery' started by ClarkKent, Oct 29, 2007.

  1. ClarkKent

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    This is my most recent work. This was done in conjunction with SpaceNut, for mutual friends of ours for some family photographs. Comments and Critique welcome, and thanks for looking.

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    Here's mom and dad,

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    I like number 2 but it has an odd yellow cast on it, is this intentional?
     
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    I like #2, also, but the contour of her face seems to get lost amongst the background. I am unusually drawn to the shine from that circle on her shirt, though, eek. Love the expression on the baby's face. :)

    Marian
     
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    Yea, I was trying to achieve somewhat of a vintage look on number two. And I think I will try to darken the circle on her shirt. I think she was wearing a white shirt under the red on. Thanks for the comment.
     
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    its strange what people see in a photo.

    i like no 1 a lot but i think no2 looks really fake

    but good focus and sharpness on both;)
     
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    I really like the baby photo, but I keep looking for her hands.
     
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    Yes, I keep forgetting to think throughout my capturing process. I think something in the foreground would have helped tremendously and gave the photo more depth. I guess I am still quite nervous when doing these types of sessions and rush through them sometimes.
     
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    I like #1 & it would have been nice to see her tiny hands. I like #2 also, but since I'm still new to portrait photography, I'm not sure what happened to make it look "fake" because since I was there I know the background is real.
     
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    I would love more light!!!!! Are you using a vid?
    Beautiful photos though. I'm just more of a blue person that a red one.
     
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    Not sure if I know what a vid is! Could you elaborate
     
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    Vid Light. It's really tungsten to the enth degree. It's beautiful though on some images. I thought you might have used it here.
     
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    This is all available outdoor lighting.
     

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