P&P of earlier shots

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  1. Darton

    Darton TPF Noob!

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    Here are the shots I uploaed yesterday. I have since done some P&P.

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  2. nossie

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    Hey.
    I appreciate your efforts.
    Here's my opinion...
    #1 I like it but the dof isn't perfect... too tight and I don't get the chance to dream away to the distance - I'm slammed into it.
    #2+3 Could be a nice stock shot but the subject lacks sharpness - could be a resizing issue.
    #4+5+6 kinda pointless subject matter but that's very open to argument. for me it's nothing to see.
    #7 technically nice shot but I wish the bg had more relevence to the burnt chair / I'd like to see more devastation from fire in the bg.
    #8 It's fine and suits me (but maybe pointless to others) Up in the back left there a funny under water like bubbling that looks like bad cloning in PS.

    Respect for your effort Jeremy. I hope my criticism is constructive.
     
  3. The Phototron

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    Number 3 is very nice, the bokeh isn't distracting like those on the last few.
     
  4. domromer

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    Are these scans?
     
  5. Darton

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    No they're not scans.
     
  6. Darton

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    The bubble effect is from the light shining through the trees in the bg. It's from the blur of the large DOF.
     
  7. Darton

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    What is the "bokeh"???
     
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    The road shot was really cool. I also like the black border you used too.
     
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    invisible Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    The part of an image that is blurred or out of focus due to a low depth of field. The smoother the background, the better the image. Unfortunately, most lenses (like yours, and like mine) don't have a good bokeh.
     

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