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  1. XpdX

    XpdX TPF Noob!

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    Thanks..:thumbup:
     
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    well, first things first, you should try cleaning your lens... or what is that damned blurry thing that's clogging the view with blurrness?
    second, i would have liked it better if the perspective was more..normal, like if you were standing in the middle of the street when you took this.
    otherwise, nice tropical paradise, bla bla pseudo landscape.
     
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    Ya, I agree with Eydryan about the lens being kinda of dirty.

    But, I really like the perspective where the street seems to keep on going forever.

    Good shot overall.
     
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    well, it would also go on forever if he was a little more to the left too, right? :D
     
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    I am not sure what you are trying to say here. I like the clouds and the palm trees. Maybe if someone was riding down the street on a red bike or something? I think it needs a stronger subject.
     
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    Ive seen similar shots like this with the tall palm trees in, but done in high contrast b&w and they looked good. why not give that a try?
     
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    Maybe:

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    Thanks for looking..=)
     
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    they look too weird for me... i liked them a lot better in colour, you know that tropical aura. this way they look like it was a taifun and well, i prefer tropical:D
     
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    It's at this point that I step in and say:
    XpdX, please read the Crit Forum guidelines here
    http://www.thephotoforum.com/forum/showthread.php?t=23315
    Your original post breached them in that you provided no information and you did not state what kind of crit you wanted, or that you even wanted a crit.
    Read the other posts to see the sort of thing that is acceptable.
    I'll leave this as is because people have started giving feedback, but please don't do it again.
     

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