Paparazzi...

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  1. RMThompson

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    The kicker light is too bright...it's blowing out her arm, hand & side...not to mention that spot on the door.
    Her face feels too dark and too red. I suppose that helps to focus attention on the shirt rather than the model...but having her looking down is probably enough to do that, without her being so dark.
     
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    I'll agree on the darkness... maybe it's a BIT too much. I can work on that.

    But the kicker is SUPPOSED to be like that... emulating a paparazzi!
     
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    And it is just like me to notice her zipper is going the right direction! Nice work.

    -Shea
     

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