Park city utah seq shot grinding box off cliff

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  1. pulser9

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    This is my first real picture im kindof proud about.


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    Whats your advise to do to it. What do you think
     
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    Very nice
    I would take out the first one of him, it doesnt look natural. Also would have like another frame or 2 at the end. Also wish he stood out more against the wall.

    But still, great sequence
     
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    i agree with jimmy about next time getting more of him at the end.

    id also crop out all that unnecessary space at the top of the picture and maybe even a little at the bottom so your subject stands out a little more and so that he's larger
     
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    I agree with both Jimmy and Spiff. The first one is kind of unnecessary. Did he land the trick? That would have been nice to see.
    Crop out some of the space out the top to put more of the viewers focus on the snowboarder.
    Other than that great sequence and nice trick:thumbup:

    And you still have snow!?! It's 85 out here!
     
  5. pulser9

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    no this picture was taken from the end of march begining of april. It kind of sucked becuase i had just came down from filming a run at the park and when we got to the botom they were filming for PC RIDE and they were taking there sweat oltime so i had to take it while i had the chance it was taken without a tripod and i didnt have time to set the right shuterspeed or apuretur so i had to do alot to get it lookign ok.
     

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