Parking Garage Rooftop

[Stoneface]

http://stoneface-gfx.deviantart.com/art/Rooftop-86936523

I'm very new to this photography thing. I thought I'd try it out. This was taken when I went shooting with my friend. I enjoyed the view from this parking garage rooftop we decided to visit and came up with this. The exposure was wayyyy off, but i tried to fix it as much as I could. My friend was busy running down a flight of 10 steps thanksto me dropping his lense cap off the edge, oops!

 

[Alpha]

Nice sky but the foreground is muddy and the lines aren't that interesting.

 

[Stoneface]

Thanks for your reply, Alpha.
I'll keep that in mind for future refrences.

 

[chris82]

http://stoneface-gfx.deviantart.com/art/Rooftop-86936523
My friend was busy running down a flight of 10 steps thanksto me dropping his lense cap off the edge, oops!

Way to go...Get your friend out of the way while you take the money shoy LOL yes you got a "ok" sky but the middle and fore ground is way under exposed

 

[Stoneface]

Hahaha, thanks Chris.
Take a look at this shot, guys. I took this earlier today. I think I'm progressing alright.

http://stoneface-gfx.deviantart.com/art/The-Fan-87213177
Full View that for the detail^

 

[DZX]

It's a decent shot, but there is no real major focal point. Nothing too interesting in it either. Try taking close, focused photos of labels like that Caution label or random and unique objects. You are progressing though, keep it up!