Passion

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  1. DramaDork626

    DramaDork626 TPF Noob!

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    Ok, thats my boyfriend and your truly. Needless to say, getting this shot wasn't easy. Nor was it really planned. truth be told I was actually kinda jokin around. But I played around with it a bit and I kinda like it. Tell me what you think of the contrast and the cropping. Cuz I cropped the back of my neck a bit cuz, well, my hair wasn't looking its best and it was a little distracting. So yah, hit me with your best shot HAZAH...
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    All of the technical aspects are nice: exposure, contrast, tonal range, etc. I think the crop is a little too tight. It is lacking in detail of you. Though there is more then 50% of you physically, your boyfriend's detail is much more pronounced in this image.
     
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    I feel the passion, looking at this pic i wish my boyfriend was here. It shows feeling and I like the contrast. Its very good, and I think that cropping worked as well ;)
     

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