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wlsmoku

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Can others edit my Photos
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07-03-08Haleyswimfinals5.jpg

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07-04-08Bixbyparty4.jpg



my critique:
1: I love this one - it really makes me wonder what she's thinking and/or looking at

2: cute....but i'm 50/50 on the hair in the face....part of me thinks it's cute fun, and part of me sees it as distracting....
 
wow...something added a lot of noise to the 1st one....the original isn't like that at all....hmmm
 
C&C per req:

1. Noise aside, this is a very nice image. It's well composed, and well exposed. Her skin is a little warm, looking rather like an extremely bad sunburn on her upper arm. What sort of post-processing did you do on this image?

2. A cute image, great expression her face, but a couple of minor compositional issues. One is the patch of grass in the upper LH corner; always try and make portriat backgrounds as homogenous as possible. The other is her right forearm. Bisecting limbs lonitudally is never a good idea; I'd suggest cropping that out. As far as the hair; I think it's fine. This is a candid portrait of a child playing, not a studio work.

Just my $00.02 worth - your milage may vary.

~John
 

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