Peace not war is in her soul.

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  1. InTheViewFinder

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    Comments and critique would be very much appreciated.

    Thank you for looking!


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    I'm not connecting the title with the image.

    I can't see her face and that bothers me.
     
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    She is climbing up a tank.

    She is for peace and against war.

    Well I kinda just captured her in the moment of climbing up the tank.
     
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    I am having a hard time with the title and the picture as well. It's a girl on a tank...but the image doesn't ilistrate anything more then that for me. Put a protest sign in her hand next time ;)

    For some reason it looks like I can see the pixels around her...or sqwigles or something. Not sure what that is or if it's just my eyes. She's also dead center in the middle...maybe if you had had her to the right a bit and more of the tank? It's kinda hard to tell it's a tank except for the treds.
     
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    I couldn't tell it was a tank. Sorry.
     
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    Well the title is for her saying Peace is in her soul and well the tank is usually used in wars

    At that moment we didn't know we were going there and we didn't have that much time there as well.
    I hope to go back there and take more photos of her there. With protest signs and take more in depth photos.

    You are right I can see the pixels around her as well. I will try and fix that.

    Thank you for critiques and comments Digital Diva and sweetsomedays.
     
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    It's a pleasure. I look forward to seeing your new images, if you get to go back! :)
     
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    Thank you :D
     
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    As a Marine wife the subject touches a sore spot. As someone who can appreciate photography I look forward to the interesting subject and any other future images you post :)
     
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    Thank you very much. :)

    Oh you are a marines wife, what are your thoughts about war? If you would like to share if not than that's alright.

    I would like to do some kind of series about the subject from all different view points about war.
     
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    PMed ya :)
     
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