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Discussion in 'The Black & White Gallery' started by montvm, Feb 15, 2009.

  1. montvm

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    My first posting ever at the forum~! C & C please....Please no Editing my photo just feedback

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    It is a wonderful picture :)
     
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    Thanks, Anything that anyone would change? I did Burn in the sweater a tiny bit after i posted this but i really like this image.
     
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    Very cute image.
    A couple of thoughts if I may.
    I think I would clone the shadow running into her head in the background.
    I also would have a look with a little taken off the dark side of the image, moving her a little off center. You could take a little off top and bottom to get you back to proper sizing afterwards.
    You certainly captured one of those precious moments.
    Well done.
     
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    Thanks for the input. I did think about taking a little off the dark to get some of the detail, and tried this but i did'nt like the results. Maybe i went too far. As far as cloning the shadow running into the head, do you mean removing it or continueing it.

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    Sorry for the delay, Mike.
    Removing it, just that one.
    The crop I'm suggesting is only perhaps just shy of her elbow and then off top and bottom to suit.
     

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