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  1. captain-spanky

    captain-spanky TPF Noob!

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    started out life as a portrait, colour shot but i seemed to like the 'medium format' style a little better for this...

    comments welcome... :)
    especially ones suggesting how i could make it better... ;)
    be as brutal as you like :D
     
  2. Camper Dave

    Camper Dave TPF Noob!

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    be brutel, eh? right.... :twisted: only jestin' mate. really like the shot :thumbsup:

    only comment i'd make is that the silouette (sp?) of the person looks a bit dark (does that sounds stupid? :? ). looking at where she's stood i would have expected there to be more light on her so she 'matched' the sorrounding cave walls. does that make any sence? if not feel free to ignor, point and laugh at me :oops: :D
     
  3. Digital Matt

    Digital Matt alter ego: Analog Matt

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    Very nice. I like it just how it is :)
     
  4. mentos_007

    mentos_007 The Freshmaker!

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    thet is a great photo. the man silhouette is great
     
  5. santino

    santino TPF Noob!

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    Hi captain!
    It's absolutely great! Don't know how to improve it (is it possible to improve it?) :D
     
  6. Alison

    Alison Swiss Army Friend Supporting Member

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    I love the texture on the cave walls. I'm with Camper Dave, something about the person seems a bit off. Perhaps the light from behind is just a bit too harsh?
     
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    absolutely striking with a bit of mystique; don't change a thing
     

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