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Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by khairi, Aug 11, 2004.

  1. khairi

    khairi TPF Noob!

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  2. mygrain

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    The first shot is great. I like the way you filled the space. The repetition of forms lead you straight to the focal in yellow. Great composition!

    The second and third are good but are very busy and I really would like to see them in finer detail. Keep up the good work!!
     
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    i like the third and the fourth ones best, nice compositions and the BW really works for them! in the second the people's heads are bit cut off and that makes your eye wander aimlessly for a while...that girl's head should have been in focus instead of the guy next to the screen IMHO but that's a minor detail...good work! :D
     
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    I like no. 2 :)
     
  5. khairi

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    thks for the comments ya'all

    i personally liked my first shot most.

    No 2...i think I could have done better.

    The third pict, i havent got much time to compose. I was near to the man but there were too many people buzzing around. i was afraid that someone might bum into me when i press the shutter open. it was taken at night.
     

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