Perfect Imperfection C&C

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  1. TheKingDavis

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    Pics i took of my step sis. c&c welcome.

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    Should probably back the cam up a bit. They're kind of close and snap shot-ish, imo.
     
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    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    And other than the first, none is in focus. The first is underexposed, though, and focus is mainly on the tip of her nose, not on the eyes, with the mascara running... Maybe there are a tad too many imperfections here to make them perfect?
     
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    they are too close to her face
     
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    well ****.
     
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    Robin Usagani Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    1,2, and 4 all have different color of skin. What color is she? :) You need to correct your WB my friend.
     
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    yes WB is def off. the first one looks underexposed.
     
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    1 is supposed to have a sad feeling to it
     
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    Reshoot. Don't give up! :)
     
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    Try stopping the aperature down a couple of stops to get a sharper image too.
     
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    Definitely too close for my liking you cut almost everything out besides what you want in there. As for the WB needs to get fixed she does have 3 skin tones in 3 pictures.. But go out for a reshoot and see what you come up with.
     
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    I'd try taking off whatever that is on your lens that's giving you the black circle. Whether it be a lens hood, or a crappy strap on fisheye adapter that gives you the worst CA I've seen aside from lenses that were physically broken.
     

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