Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by Sergiozal, Mar 30, 2005.
In my point of view, this shot lacs something that I can't figure out what it is.
The needle on the record INSIDE the frame???
agreed, i wouldnt have been able to tell what it was if not for the title
I dunno...the structure and lighting just don't seem to strike me right.
actually i think its pretty cool. i would probably include a bit more of the record label and needle, but not much. the rust sets the mood and helps my imagination as to the bad quality of sound i'd hear; establishing a period.... if that makes sense. anyway, good job.
I think a bit more detail on the arm of the player. Maybe some different lighting to bring out some contrast. I deffinatly agree with Xmetal though, the needle would be an excellent addition.
once i figured out what it was i liked it.
i might try several different angles, including maybe a tad zoomed out? maybe? i'd really like to see some more of it, just out of curiosity.
i agree with the needle.
play a bit with the lightning... and sharpness... dunno why but it seemsto be a bit unsharp here... or that's only my screen.
yes more is better in this case, and also sharper, nice idea!
Thank you all
I guess it is a bit of all comments. The needle -I didn't realize that- Is something important to the object, I would say it is the MOST important in this case. I payed more attention to the circular forms than to the meaning of the subject.
The lightining does not help as well. Should have some backlight.
Unfortunately I can't shot it again because it is so far from home, but the comments will help me for further trials.
Good shots for you all!!!
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