Photo - 'Golden Gate'. Comments welcome.

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  1. shaneferguson

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    Hi all,

    Comments welcome for this photo, please.

    Cheers,
    Shane :)

    www.shanefergusonphotography.co.uk



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  2. rmh159

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    I like it... I think it works.

    I personally think that some of the white sky could be cropped and maybe made into a horizontal shot. I've always though that one of the most notable attributes of the GG bridge was it's red color but I actually don't think taking that color away hurts the pic. I definitely like the 2-toned shot though.

    I dunno... just my opinion. :wink:
     
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    No photo for me
     
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    nice shot, but i think i would have cropped the white sky off the top and maybe even a bit of the water on the bottom. i think they detract from the photo because they're more white noise then subject matter.
     
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    i like it

    it looks almost like a really old shot from long ago, then you look at the cars, and its not
     
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    I think it's a great shot.
    I tweaked it just a tad in photoshop. The tower in the background is a little ditracting. And the side of the deck has a great line to it that curves very nicely, I would enhance that effect a bit by increasing the brightness of it.
     

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