Photo of mom

Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by kel_aa, Sep 9, 2007.

  1. kel_aa

    kel_aa TPF Noob!

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    I'd like come feedback on composition and possible cropping suggestions please. Does it bother you that the eyes are hidden? Could the shadow on the rock be more interesting at a slightly different angle?

    -Kelvin

    Southern Georgian Bay, Ontario.
    50mm lens with polarizer on 400 Black's (Fuji?)
     
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    I think you should have crouched down and shot her from her own level instead of looking down on her. The glasses don't bother me, but the shadows do; if she turned a little towards the sun the shadow might not have been so pronounced. Or, you could have moved over to your left a bit to also reduce the shadow, which is sort of distracting.

    This is a nice picture in of itself. Hopefully, I have been somewhat helpful... :)
     

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