Photogram

[Artemis]

Since my other Photogrammes made such an impact, I wanna submit this one to the good old Critique gallery, and I hope it still gets a good reply.

 

[Big Mike]

I really like the light bulb & the feather. However I think the lines take away from the image.

Great work with the technique, very creative.

 

[santino]

I disagree about the lines

great stuff, again greenish

...but wait.. the lower line on the bottom of the left (half transparent) bothers a bit.

 

[Nikon Fan]

Artemis, I think this is pretty cool. The only suggestion I might have would be if the lightbulb could have been more like that first pic you posted with just the lightbulb. Still pretty cool tho...like it alot!