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  1. Artemis

    Artemis Just Punked Himself

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    Since my other Photogrammes made such an impact, I wanna submit this one to the good old Critique gallery, and I hope it still gets a good reply.

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  2. Big Mike

    Big Mike I am Big, I am Mike Staff Member Supporting Member

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    I really like the light bulb & the feather. However I think the lines take away from the image.

    Great work with the technique, very creative.
     
  3. santino

    santino TPF Noob!

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    I disagree about the lines :p

    great stuff, again greenish :D

    ...but wait.. the lower line on the bottom of the left (half transparent) bothers a bit.
     
  4. Nikon Fan

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    Artemis, I think this is pretty cool. The only suggestion I might have would be if the lightbulb could have been more like that first pic you posted with just the lightbulb. Still pretty cool tho...like it alot!
     

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