Photos from the Abandoned Plant C&C please.

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  1. jeff000

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    Here are 4 of my favorites.

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    C&C please.
    Was just a fun shoot with a still learning model, was interesting getting poses that worked without touching anything, lol.
     
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    Really strong work.

    I do see a slight blue cast on the model #1 and #2, and would have her pull her thumb out from under her bottoms in #4 (while still alluring that she's giving a sneak peak).

    Otherwise, Awesome. Stunning shots of a stunning model.
     
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    Light was coming through a bluish green panel in the wall :) Taking the blue out in PS (when I tried anyways) made it not look right, lost its uniqueness.

    And now that you mention I agree, thumb out would have been best.

    Thanks :)
     
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    #1 is ok, # 2 she looks like a corpse with the light and the makeup or pp. #3 picture reminds me of a scrap book where u cut out models out of a magazine and paste them into a bg image. #4 I don't find this picture sexy or aluring. There are some shadows around her feet, nice touch.
     
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    really like 1 and 2. the blue cast gives the pictures character, i feel they take me to that location.
    i am not too crazy with 3 and 4, pretty model, technique seems fine but I think the environment does not match the model. PP looks a hair oversmooth on both.
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