Photoshoot of the girlfriend

Discussion in 'People Photography' started by shortpballer, Aug 6, 2009.

  1. shortpballer

    shortpballer TPF Noob!

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    This is my first time shooting with my canon 20d that I just picked up. Just got into photography. I know I should have posted this in the beginner forum, but I just wanted to see what the more advanced photographers thought. Only rules on critiquing...don't make fun of the girl, because she's my girlfriend. Other than that please try and keep it to helpful criticisms.

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  2. Crazydad

    Crazydad No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Too many pictures in 1 post. Best to put just a few.

    I'm not real fond of the whole tilted look, but overall I think there are some nice shots here. Focus is off in #1 (on the flower, not her) and #12 (shoulder is in focus, but not her face). If she is looking at the camera, her eyes need to be in focus.

    As for the night shots, I like the colors but the horizons need to be straightened (tilted to the left).

    Just my $0.02.
     
  3. Jeffro

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    If you want good feedback with good information go to the beginners sections and read the RULES on C&C

    1 to 3 pictures max
    Information on how and what settings you used
    Any info on what your concept was for the picture!

    You will get more and better responses. Really need to read rules if you want the better people on here to respond!
     
  4. bigtwinky

    bigtwinky No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Dude, you already posted all these in another thread. It is not proper on a forum to post the same thing in multiple places. Just the best place to post it.

    In your set here, I don't see how buildings, flowers and night shots have to do anything with "people" photography.

    Break up your images and post the people ones here, and the others in a more appropriate section.
     
  5. clax

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    First of all welcome to this forum.I would say,there are room for improvement for a beginner.I did remember how I started and with the help of forum members ,I have slowly improve.Heres my view.Pict no.1 seems OOF ,Try focus on the eyes for portraiture.Pic 2 is somehow underexposed.While Pic 11&12 are soft.I like the colors of the night scene. :thumbup: effort for shooting out there.
     
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    #14 is gd :drool:
    #9 too much make up
     
  7. gopal

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    #8,#14 are good....u tried well...as a beginner i appreciate ur efforts....but post 2-3 photos at a time....for comments.
     
  8. UUilliam

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    Wow, She's...
    uh i mean your pictures are nice :~)
    Some pics are too hot (that really is about your picture.. nto you gf.. although she is..)
    try cool the temperature / fix the WB in photoshop (if you have it)
     
  9. JTG40cal

    JTG40cal TPF Noob!

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    A few questions, only because I am new to all this too...

    What was your lighting source for #3?

    What settings did you use for #17 and #18? Flash? Tripod?
     
  10. musicaleCA

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    Look at the catchlights, shadow of the nose ring, and angle of the frame in #3. It's on-camera flash. ;)
     
  11. shortpballer

    shortpballer TPF Noob!

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    It is an on camera flash. And that thing is a piece... Just picked up a 430ex yesterday so i'm hoping I will get better pictures soon. And the night shots yes I used a tripod, no flash.
     
  12. Yemme

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    #4 Rocks.... Love the angle.... and the architecture.
     

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