Piano B&W Critique

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  1. iflynething

    iflynething TPF Noob!

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    Misc. black and white pics that I like. Especially the first one

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    #2
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    #3
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    #4
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    Camera is a Nikon Coolpix L4


    Thanks

    ~Michael~
     
  2. LaFoto

    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    "Miscellaneous pics" don't qualify for the Photo Critique which - despite it's being part of the Foundations of Photography - is a forum designed for some VERY specific critique on a specified (by the poster) aspect of ONE of their photos (or that photo plus a couple of versions of the same).

    The Galleries ("general", "landscape and nature", "portraits and weddings" etc.) are there for presenting a variety of photos on which the poster would like to hear some general comments/critique.

    That is why I shall move this thread over to the General Gallery.

    But not without saying that I find the sunbursts on the keys in 1 a bit bright and a tad distracting, that of the piano series I like 2 very much, that your cat is nice, and the light rays in 4 are extra special. Nice!
     
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    That 1st shot is awesome!!!!!
     
  4. iflynething

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    Ok. Sorry about that. Well, just as long as I can get critique on it, it doesn't matter. Thanks for both of your comments though.

    ~Michael~
     
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    Shot number 2 is the one for me - a very clear winner!

    Regards, Tony
     
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    Wonderful shots esp. number 2
     
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    #2!
     
  8. iflynething

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    Thanks for the comments.

    I just took alot more of the keyboard that I like. Seems B&W is the best for this.

    Thanks aggain. Looks like #2 is the most popular.

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    The light on the last black key in the first pic is a bit distracting, my eye goes straight to that...
     
  10. iflynething

    iflynething TPF Noob!

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    That sunburst is kinda what I was going for. For me, it's different.

    Any way that could be taken out with PS and what it looks like?

    Thanks again

    ~Michael~
     
  11. nealjpage

    nealjpage multi format master in a film geek package

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    #3 is kinda cool, but I'd crop out whatever it is that's below the cat. It's kind of destracting.
     
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    I kept that in there because I felt like it gave it some depth.

    That is actually the edge of my piano! :)

    ~Michael~
     

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