Pic Creatique

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  1. KindredAutmn

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    It's an interesting picture, and I like the idea. For some reason close up shots of the human eye fascinate me. Maybe it's due to it being an amazing display of biological engineering...

    A couple things from my perspective, I'd like to see the eye in better focus (seems a little soft). I also would like to see the whole eye, move the hair a bit out of the way. And try to get rid of those reflections in the eye and bring out those great colors in the iris. Maybe moving the light source would help?

    The colors also seem a bit washed out to me, maybe a bit less exposure. Lastly, and bear in mind I don't know exactly what you were going for with this shot, but I would like to see a less canted image. Maybe a little more straight on the face, with respect to the camera angle.

    Anyway, that's just my opinion. Disagree if you wish! :lol:
     
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    :thumbdown::lol: jkjk

    im not even amateur so even half of that i didnt get xD anyways thq :hug::
     
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    Well, I like your spelling of the word "critique". "Creatique" suggests creative critique to me, and I like that.

    In short: this concept for a photo could have worked out better if the photo had been in focus (to my mind it is not only "a little soft", but too out of focus), and if not so many things had reflected in the eye.
     
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    :scratch: I can't tell if I've been insulted, or thanked.. :lmao:

    I hope it was the latter... :lol:
     
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    ill try not to do the same failures next time...thq ^^
     
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    thanked xD :lmao:
     
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