picnic in the night

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  1. willg133

    willg133 TPF Noob!

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    from the first set of night shots with my 300d. let me know...

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    You are on to a good photo. The problem I see in this frame is the background. It is super distracting. I try and keep in mind that the eye immediately goes to the brightest point in the shot.
     
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    This photo seems to be divided into two halves that have little to do with each other: the very quiet wooden bench and table (on which I do miss signs of a picnic, after that had been mentioned in the title), and the seemingly busy (lots of light!) background. It's hard to decide where to look (and yes: I do miss the picnic on that table!).
     
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    yeah those lights at the top distract me as well...i think i just need more practice shooting non-landscape night shots
     

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