picture of a dog

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  1. usa

    usa TPF Noob!

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    hey what are you think about this picture?
    can i do something with photo shop to make the picture better!
    Yfrog - dsc8228o
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  2. usa

    usa TPF Noob!

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    hey please answer somebody
    what is good or bad on this picture
    just say what can i make better (next time)
    any ideas?
     
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    Patience, grasshopper...we are not all waiting with bated breath to review everyone's photos. :lol:

    I like the pose and expression of your Yorkie, but the image is overexposed and I find the OOF leg in the foreground, and the collar to be a bit of distraction...but you have a basically good start.
     
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    KmH Helping photographers learn to fish Supporting Member

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  5. Jeremy Z

    Jeremy Z No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    To me, the base picture itself is good. To make it better, here's what I'd do:

    - Crop in closer on his head. There's nothing behind his ear that adds anything to the photo

    - The focal point of this picture should be his eye. What can you do to draw our eyes to HIS eye?
     
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    thanks for the tips
    i will try it and reposed it than
     
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    also, i'd have taken off the red collar, it's distracting.
     
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    Pretty much: take off the collar, get rid of unnecessary hair.

    The pose is great, the focus is good. The background isn't too distracting, nor boring.
    The blueish white contrast against his fur is complimentary. Good job! :)
     
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    better?
     
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    I like it, thinking in deep thoughts.
     
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    i added an highpass
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