Picture of my sister c&c please :)

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  1. kayliana

    kayliana TPF Noob!

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    It's seem that the focus was not made on the eyes.
    And try to crop, I think theres a too big space between the head and the end of the picture. Keep working! :)
     
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    You found a corner with nice, even lighting and the pose is good.

    I don't know to what stage you planned this shot, but if you want viewers to concentrate on her face, put her in a less busy shirt - and perhaps long sleeves.
     
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    Aw dang, I actually had this picture cropped, I posted the wrong one. Thank you. I never thought about long sleeves, I'm new to this, but I have been reading a lot. Thank you guys!
     
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    Kayliana, I think this would look nice in black and white and I think it is a bit underexposed BUT I like bright photos....

    I think you did miss the focus on her face but at this size it is hard to say where it fell. I really like the eye contact you got and her expression.

    I would love to try a black and white action I have on this one, but I see your photos are not okay to edit.
     

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