Discussion in 'People Photography' started by kayliana, Nov 3, 2009.
It's seem that the focus was not made on the eyes.
And try to crop, I think theres a too big space between the head and the end of the picture. Keep working!
You found a corner with nice, even lighting and the pose is good.
I don't know to what stage you planned this shot, but if you want viewers to concentrate on her face, put her in a less busy shirt - and perhaps long sleeves.
Aw dang, I actually had this picture cropped, I posted the wrong one. Thank you. I never thought about long sleeves, I'm new to this, but I have been reading a lot. Thank you guys!
Kayliana, I think this would look nice in black and white and I think it is a bit underexposed BUT I like bright photos....
I think you did miss the focus on her face but at this size it is hard to say where it fell. I really like the eye contact you got and her expression.
I would love to try a black and white action I have on this one, but I see your photos are not okay to edit.
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