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Discussion in 'Photography Beginners' Forum' started by KylePeterson, Feb 21, 2009.

  1. KylePeterson

    KylePeterson TPF Noob!

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    Couple pictures I took in the freezing Minnesota weather this afternoon. C&C is welcomed!

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    #1 - Could use more contrast...has a very gray feel to it instead of B&W. Don't care for the composition...very busy on the right side. Is the main subject the birdhouse, the tree trunk or the building in the background?

    #2 - Dead center is deadly. Centering a subject in the frame makes the picture static and boring. It's exposed well and I like the shadows.
     
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    i think the first one could deffinately use a little contrast and maybe reshoot using f5.6 and focus on the star of the bird house
     

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