Pictures of a Girl

Discussion in 'People Photography' started by hercry1441, Jul 31, 2008.

  1. hercry1441

    hercry1441 TPF Noob!

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    This is my first real try at doing a portrait-type picture, so any and all C&C is greatly appreciated. Thanks for looking!

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    C&C per req:

    1. I like the pose and expression, good work on the eyes, however the highlights on her right cheekbone and left wrist are a little strong. As well the blur that you've applied doesn't really work for me.

    2. Not as fond of this one. The catchlights in her eyes are over-strong, as are the highlights around her eyes/cheeks.

    Nice work, but with some minor issues, which are easily correctable. I think a diffuser would have helped your lighting greatly.

    Just my $00.02 worth - your milage may vary

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    hercry1441 TPF Noob!

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    Thanks so much, that's exactly what I needed! Regarding the blur, she liked it so I left it there, but I don't really like it that much either.
     

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