Piia

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My friend Piia.

I have very poor studio, so be kind.

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Ok. Is that two lights? Looks like large, diffuse light at camera right and hairlight at camera left. Do you have a fill?

In any event, not too shabby at all. Lighting works particularly well in #3. I think perhaps you need to interact more with your subjects. Her eyes look rather lifeless.
 
^ Three. One softbox front, one umbrella in back-left and one light in back-right, and a reflector on models hands if nesessary.

Thanks for c&c.
 
I like 3 too :)
I think you vlew out the right cheek in 2. and 4 and 5 are ... odd
 
i think #3 is the strongest in this set, but maybe with different post work. imo, maybe better/stronger b&w tones with a bit more contrast would work.
 
Overall, very nice portrait shots. I think I would have tried about a half stop less exposure from the front flash, though.
 

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