PIm ready for my close up

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  1. DramaDork626

    DramaDork626 TPF Noob!

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    taken with my olympus digital. done with low flash, i filtered it with toilet paper. how ghetto is that.... Yes, my skin is that white. I need a little help. I tried doing a bunch of touch ups, but it still screams amateur. Gimme tips, tips are good. I like tips. tippy tippy tips. its a tip bit tipply out. Its think its something in the eyes...
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  2. DocFrankenstein

    DocFrankenstein Clinically Insane?

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    Good news - you're cute!

    You need to change your approach.

    Never use built in flash inside.
    Yellow bracelet is distracting
    So is the thing you're standing on
    Tidy up the hair a bit
    Keep the fingers together... place them on the side of the body

    ... Err... I don't know what look you're going for, but arching your back usually adds to the picture.
     

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