PIm ready for my close up

[DramaDork626]

taken with my olympus digital. done with low flash, i filtered it with toilet paper. how ghetto is that.... Yes, my skin is that white. I need a little help. I tried doing a bunch of touch ups, but it still screams amateur. Gimme tips, tips are good. I like tips. tippy tippy tips. its a tip bit tipply out. Its think its something in the eyes...

 

[DocFrankenstein]

Good news - you're cute!

You need to change your approach.

Never use built in flash inside.
Yellow bracelet is distracting
So is the thing you're standing on
Tidy up the hair a bit
Keep the fingers together... place them on the side of the body

... Err... I don't know what look you're going for, but arching your back usually adds to the picture.