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Discussion in 'Photography Beginners' Forum' started by Juice, Jul 16, 2010.

  1. Juice

    Juice TPF Noob!

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    I must have taken at least 20 shots of this trying to get something I liked. This is in a car museum, so my mobility around the cars was limited. I think the shot came out ok, but I was kind of at a loss on how to improve it. What would you have done differently? TIA ;)

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    i would have took photo's of females... perhaps :p
     
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    It would have looked nice with the hood ornament in focus as well, but I'm guessing you pretty much had to shoot wide open to get this shot. Still, I would have cranked the ISO as much as I could to have a larger DoF.
     
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    it looks like a lid of a gas grill
     
  5. Juice

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    Actually I do have a shot with the hood ornament in better focus.

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    Not sure why you're asking. These are rather mundane things.
     
  7. Juice

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    Because it's an open forum and I wanted to. Any questions?
     
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    Not sure why you're posting. Your posts are about rather mundane things.

    Seriously, get over yourself. Not everyone can be this great, not-a-photographer like you. He likes the subject. Just because you don't doesn't mean you can be an a**hole about it. Either give constructive criticism, or shut the hell up.
     
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    The text and high contrast on the lower right are providing competing attention away from the hood. I like the leading lines of the ceiling, but dislike the visual noise up there.

    What do you think of these quick and dirty edits?
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    I'd also like it framed so that "PLAYBOY" appears a little higher in the frame.
     

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