Please advice

Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by Ivana again, Jan 21, 2005.

  1. Ivana again

    Ivana again TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Jan 21, 2005
    Messages:
    98
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    Dubrovnik
    Can you sugest me what can I make? so this pic look better? What did I made wrong?Maybe perspective or ??? thank you!

    [​IMG]


    p.s the window is dirty cos there is lots of pigeons there near the window.But in my opinion I think its better atmosfer of the pic when the window is not soo clean.
     
  2. Ghoste

    Ghoste TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Dec 27, 2004
    Messages:
    552
    Likes Received:
    1
    Location:
    Yorba Linda, CA.
    Kinda bright in the upper left, maybe darken up the pic. But I'm not a pro. I like the shot you were going for though.
     
  3. JonMikal

    JonMikal TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Jul 28, 2004
    Messages:
    12,262
    Likes Received:
    327
    i kept thinking "the windows the windows" but the more i look at it i like them dirty and all! the old window panels distorts the outside if you will and the sash frames the far building nicely. seems, from this vantage point, you got the best you could do unless you repelled from the roof down. :wink:

    for me it works!
     
  4. LittleMan

    LittleMan TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Dec 14, 2004
    Messages:
    6,648
    Likes Received:
    121
    Location:
    Texas
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    Try getting more of the inside window in the picture.
    Around the edge it needs to have more of a border from that window.

    It is over exposed outside.... you need to make the light metering meter it for outside...
    Also, try focusing it on the outside buildings instead of the window itself.
    If you can, try to make the F-stop not open so much(the smaller number the better)

    You're doing good though! you have to idea right! :D
     
  5. LittleMan

    LittleMan TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Dec 14, 2004
    Messages:
    6,648
    Likes Received:
    121
    Location:
    Texas
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    ahhh you're too easy :wink:
     
  6. elsaspet

    elsaspet TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Dec 14, 2004
    Messages:
    4,055
    Likes Received:
    37
    Location:
    Dallas
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    I like it too.
     
  7. JonMikal

    JonMikal TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Jul 28, 2004
    Messages:
    12,262
    Likes Received:
    327
    it's not in the critique section ;)
     
  8. LittleMan

    LittleMan TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Dec 14, 2004
    Messages:
    6,648
    Likes Received:
    121
    Location:
    Texas
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    she asked for a critique ;)

    :mrgreen:

    Ivana, I love your picture by the way! :D
     
  9. Ivana again

    Ivana again TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Jan 21, 2005
    Messages:
    98
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    Dubrovnik

    Well I was thinking to go to the roof but they didnt let me:mrgreen:
     
  10. Ivana again

    Ivana again TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Jan 21, 2005
    Messages:
    98
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    Dubrovnik
    Thank you! I will try again to take similar pic.I think i will succed to do that( first two advice you gave me) but with focusing it will be harder.But I will try ...
     
  11. Digital Matt

    Digital Matt alter ego: Analog Matt

    Joined:
    Jan 30, 2004
    Messages:
    5,346
    Likes Received:
    65
    Location:
    Santa Barbara, CA
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos NOT OK to edit
    It's like it alot as is. I would probably just fix that abberation in the upper left corner.

    Maybe try high contrast B&W?
     
  12. Patrick

    Patrick TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Oct 2, 2003
    Messages:
    562
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    Xenia, OH
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos NOT OK to edit
    I agree with the comment for a wider shot on the window.

    Maybe remove the dark spot in the top left. I know there has to be a way to adjust the slight "blown out" look or Glare on the windows.

    Black and White may be very cool with this shot. Maybe with a tad of oversharpening and a PS filter...emm Yellow maybe?
     

Share This Page