Please comment on my Pic and Help me improve

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  1. crasho

    crasho TPF Noob!

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    Hi

    I'm a new member and a real noobie in Photography my gear is Canon A720 IS

    I'm hoping you willing to help me to improve.

    Please comment on these unedited photo

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    Shutter speed: 1/80
    Aperture Value: 2.8F
    ISO : 80
    Focal Length: 5.8mm
    White Balance: Cloudy

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    Shot while in traffice jam
    Shutter Speed: 0.5
    Aperture Level: 4.0F
    ISO: 1600
    Focal Length: 5.8mm
    White Balance: florescent
     
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    ur camera way too noisy to take photos at ISO 1600!

    and i dnt understand #1
     
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    crasho TPF Noob!

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    Two edited sun set photo.

    I make it warmer with warming filter in Photoshop.
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    crop and adjust red level
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    crasho TPF Noob!

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    understand your point the ISO it was one of my first snap on the camera.

    number one is just a lamp and it would be rotated i dunno why it's not showed rotated here.
    Open the shutter speed longer to get the glare from the lamp
     
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    H.M. TPF Noob!

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    Those 2 balloon shots exhibit focal loss through camera shake. If you had set ISO 200 instead of ISO 80 you'd have had a higher shutter speed to compensate for that camera shake.
     
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    crasho TPF Noob!

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    thanks

    I'm sticking to the ISO 80 in hope to get good quality shot but I think you are right maybe I should increase the ISO so there would be less shake.

    Btw I forgot to mention that those two shot take take through hotel window.

    I cannot open the window so I take the picture as close as possible to the window
     
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    What the hell is focal loss?
     
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    sabbath999 No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    I think it is supposed to sound fancier than blurry.
     
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    manaheim Jedi Bunnywabbit Staff Member Supporting Member

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    The pictures really don't "say" anything to me... they kinda look like just random shots of things you happened to see.
     
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    crasho TPF Noob!

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    thanks i think i need to improve on that.
    Any suggestion to improve on it?

    I like to take picture but do not know know how to make it more meaningful
     
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    crasho TPF Noob!

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    please comment on these picture

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    What's to say that hasn't been said already? The best bit of advice I can give you is don't shoot through a window, it rarely turns out.

    Deciding what to shoot is really up to you, look at what other people shoot and how they do it. What of other peoples stuff do you like and why do you like it. Then go out and start shooting what's around you, take LOTS of shots. Decide what works, what doesn't and ask yourself why.

    The best way to learn is to shoot more.
     

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