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  1. kRiZ cPEc

    kRiZ cPEc TPF Noob!

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    Went taking photo twice last week, selected some from the slot and post them here. Please give me some feedback, such as what you feel about them.
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    I really like the last one! :) :thumbup:
     
  3. kRiZ cPEc

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    thanks, you're quick!:D
     
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    These are just so so IMO, except for the last one. In particular,

    #1 needs something more to make it stand out. There is not really much there to look at, objects are too far away.

    #2 is too dark, and again, objects are too far away to really notice any detail.

    #3 is cool, but looks like you had some camera shake because of the low light. A fast lens would help on that, or crank up the ISO a bit more to compensate.

    #4 is hazy and lacking contrast. The composition is pretty good, but the top of the mountain is cut off, and the foreground is not all that interesting.

    #5 definitely stands out as the best one for sure! Great composition in that one, and good color.

    All of them need to be posted as larger images, at least 600 pixels wide. Its very difficult to critique detail with this size of image.

    NJ
     
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    If you add contrast and lighten two it becomes a better picture to use as an example of the creature since it is more detailed.

    It looks as though number three needs more contrast.

    The last on seems to be fine to me

    The first one I didn't understand so I didn't try to analyze it. Hope this helps some.
     
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    i like the last one alot!
     
  7. kRiZ cPEc

    kRiZ cPEc TPF Noob!

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    Thanks very much NJ. I have sharpen 003 a bit.
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    Does it look better now?
     
  8. kRiZ cPEc

    kRiZ cPEc TPF Noob!

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    you certainly helped a lot! :wink:

    Following your suggestion, I give 002 a tighter crop and did some contrast adjustment.

    This is what I got:
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  9. kRiZ cPEc

    kRiZ cPEc TPF Noob!

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    Just got a photo a butterfly ready:
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    I have cropped, and sharpened it. Please also comment on this one.

    Finally I am no longer a newbie, moving up!
     
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    Yes, now you get initiated. Who's got the goat? Can of lard? Camera?
     
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    I would prefer some cakes.:lol:
     

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