Please critic!

Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by ats, Jul 27, 2004.

  1. ats

    ats TPF Noob!

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    Okay I edited the one I did not really want critiqued.

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  2. Big Mike

    Big Mike I am Big, I am Mike Staff Member Supporting Member

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    If you want critique...try to post only one photo per topic. It gets confusing when we try to critique multiple photos.
     
  3. Digital Matt

    Digital Matt alter ego: Analog Matt

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    I like the fire extinguisher photo. If you correct it so it's level, and brighten it up a bit, it would be even better.
     
  4. StvShoop

    StvShoop TPF Noob!

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    the lighting is interesting.
    the globally-present gradient on the wall is a cool contrast with the box, which reflects light differently. nice colors too

    only thing i don't really like is that it doesn't say much or tell a story. this is the kind of photo which it would please me to come across in a larger context of interrelated work, like some kind of installation art or a website

    i mentioned this photo in another thread, hope you don't mind :oops:
    http://www.thephotoforum.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=71802#71802
     
  5. ats

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    no not a problem at all,

    I liked it because of the contrasting color palette (red/blue/yelow)
    and yes I agree not very artistic, not to mention croocked (at work with no tripod (hehe I got enough looks in the corridor taking several pictures of the extinguisher...lol)

    I need to reload PS and learn how to fix such croocked images..

    well I had a topic, but someone suggested if I wanted a critique to not have more than one picture.

    here are the pictures I had associated under the theme "at work"

    http://photo.longcoeur.com/P7190180.JPG
    http://photo.longcoeur.com/P7190182.JPG
    http://photo.longcoeur.com/P7190183.JPG

    last one is a co-worker thah insisted in being in the picture..lol
     
  6. anua

    anua TPF Noob!

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    it looks like we have similar interests, he he - i like those kind of shots/compositions alot
     
  7. nikon90s

    nikon90s TPF Noob!

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    looks like this could be found in the MATRIX. I like the colors and lighting.
     
  8. jadin

    jadin The Mad Hatter

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    It looks crooked to me. Have you tried how it looks aligned?
     

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