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ats

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Okay I edited the one I did not really want critiqued.

P7190174.JPG
 
If you want critique...try to post only one photo per topic. It gets confusing when we try to critique multiple photos.
 
I like the fire extinguisher photo. If you correct it so it's level, and brighten it up a bit, it would be even better.
 
the lighting is interesting.
the globally-present gradient on the wall is a cool contrast with the box, which reflects light differently. nice colors too

only thing i don't really like is that it doesn't say much or tell a story. this is the kind of photo which it would please me to come across in a larger context of interrelated work, like some kind of installation art or a website

i mentioned this photo in another thread, hope you don't mind :oops:
http://www.thephotoforum.com/forum/viewtopic.php?p=71802#71802
 
no not a problem at all,

I liked it because of the contrasting color palette (red/blue/yelow)
and yes I agree not very artistic, not to mention croocked (at work with no tripod (hehe I got enough looks in the corridor taking several pictures of the extinguisher...lol)

I need to reload PS and learn how to fix such croocked images..

well I had a topic, but someone suggested if I wanted a critique to not have more than one picture.

here are the pictures I had associated under the theme "at work"

http://photo.longcoeur.com/P7190180.JPG
http://photo.longcoeur.com/P7190182.JPG
http://photo.longcoeur.com/P7190183.JPG

last one is a co-worker thah insisted in being in the picture..lol
 
it looks like we have similar interests, he he - i like those kind of shots/compositions alot
 

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