Please critique...

[N'Kolor]

Please let me know if you think this B&W is better.

 

[cumi]

I like this last one more.

To the thread-original:
- the moment is excellent, as mentioned before and it has a huge potential to be a nice (and cheap) christmas photo-gift (A4 format) for grandparents - I do the same thing myself too. ;-)
- I'm kind of freaky clean-maniac type, so I look immedietly on the dirty fuga (the white thing between the plates on the wall). So please PS it out it's distracting ;-)
- The tube and the wall supposed to be white, isn't it? Generally, I thing the photo is underexposed and lucks contrast. It can be easyly fixed in PS, too.
- There is a shadow because of the flash. Try next time to bounce on the ceiling and it will disappear.

Hope this helps for next time.

The good thing is, that you can practice almost every day with the same subject and under same circumstances!

 

[N'Kolor]

Great suggestions! I currently use the onboard flash and am waiting til Christmas to get an external flash.