Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by wwwphotosnartistcom, Apr 28, 2005.
The light here is very pretty. I think if you cropped off some of the foreground, and maybe a bit off the top, you'd have a stronger composition.
I think if you cropped it all the way down from the top until you can't see any other boats it would be nice.
I don't like the sky. It feels dirty to me.
At first when I read that I didn't think it would look good to me, but I adjusted the image on my screen so I could only see the boat in the foreground and I think it looks awesome that way. You still get the hint of the sun in the reflections of the water and it gives it almost a feel of isolation. I think Terri's crop would work well, also.
I just did the same thing, and that IS an excellent crop idea! :thumbup: You'd definitely want all of that foreground to make the one little boat look isolated.
Good eye, there, mountainlander!
yeah.. the crop might be interesting.. but I like it how it is too I like the sky and the colour of it... very nice
sorry to mess with your pic but this would look cool if it was higher res
click on it for slighty larger pic
^^that would be a better crop. it has more punch to it.
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