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  1. wwwphotosnartistcom

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    The light here is very pretty. I think if you cropped off some of the foreground, and maybe a bit off the top, you'd have a stronger composition. :)
     
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    I think if you cropped it all the way down from the top until you can't see any other boats it would be nice.

    I don't like the sky. It feels dirty to me.
     
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    At first when I read that I didn't think it would look good to me, but I adjusted the image on my screen so I could only see the boat in the foreground and I think it looks awesome that way. You still get the hint of the sun in the reflections of the water and it gives it almost a feel of isolation. I think Terri's crop would work well, also.
     
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    I just did the same thing, and that IS an excellent crop idea! :thumbup: You'd definitely want all of that foreground to make the one little boat look isolated.

    Good eye, there, mountainlander! :)
     
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    yeah.. the crop might be interesting.. but I like it how it is too :D I like the sky and the colour of it... very nice
     
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    sorry to mess with your pic but this would look cool if it was higher res


    click on it for slighty larger pic

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    ^^that would be a better crop. it has more punch to it.
     

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