OK, i am sixteen and write a lot of poetry which helps me think. I wrote these about people and also whilst in a previous, disastrous relationship, lol! Tell me what you think! S L O W M O T I O N Life, stands still, and my head revolves. Slowly. She pauses, and takes a breath. Slowly. I take her hand, she reaches out. Slowly. The moment lingers. Slowly. But my heart, beats. Fast. Light The light shines upon my chest, It twists and turns, casting Red patterns inside of me, That seem to resemble balloons That are pinched upon the top. I look directly and burn my eyes, Its beauty is beyond compare, and I mutter slowly, praising the lord, As my red balloons inside of me grow Massive. I dare not look away. My hand touches, feels the contours, And as a happy emotion surfaces, the Light intensifies. A weight on my shoulder, And the beautiful light shines behind me, Ever watchful, ever in love.