poetry .3.

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  1. motcon

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    all through these eyes
    you may
    look not
    for from these tarnish
    brings no higher return
    all i see is (
    priceless ageless-
    eternally young
    and weightless
    more valuable and
    heavier than metals precious
    that i
    carry through acres of seasons
    that from my impressions
    bloom flowers of i (eye
    and remembrance
     
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    ...... no comment..... it kind of had no structure or rhythm at all........
     
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    research: abstract and concrete forms of poetry

    a la ee cummings

    sorry to make you 'think'.
     
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    okay?.........
     

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