Poetry Game

christopher walrath

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I'll start on the next thread. But try to match rythym and rhyme, line for line, one line at a time. Add the full text of the poem in the thread above you and add your line to the bottom. Hell, don't rhyme if you don't want too. Just put your creative self into it. Next thread here goes.
 
In the quest for love in mortal shell
Criminals die and go to hell
Suppressed by remorse, it'll never fail
 
In the quest for love in mortal shell
Criminals die and go to hell
Suppressed by remorse, it'll never fail
He looked and he searched, for the holy grail

He was a man, fair and wan
 
In the quest for love in mortal shell
Criminals die and go to hell
Suppressed by remorse, it'll never fail
He looked and he searched, for the holy grail

He was a man, fair and wan
Who drove a fully laden rental van
 
In the quest for love in mortal shell
Criminals die and go to hell
Suppressed by remorse, it'll never fail
He looked and he searched, for the holy grail

He was a man, fair and wan
Who drove a fully laden rental van
His denture dancing in a rusty can
 
In the quest for love in mortal shell
Criminals die and go to hell
Suppressed by remorse, it'll never fail
He looked and he searched, for the holy grail

He was a man, fair and wan
Who drove a fully laden rental van
His denture dancing in a rusty can
Because the fixer was spent.
 
In the quest for love in mortal shell
Criminals die and go to hell
Suppressed by remorse, it'll never fail
He looked and he searched, for the holy grail

He was a man, fair and wan
Who drove a fully laden rental van
His denture dancing in a rusty can
Because the fixer was spent.

So on and on and on he went
with nothing on but a smile at best
 
In the quest for love in mortal shell
Criminals die and go to hell
Suppressed by remorse, it'll never fail
He looked and he searched, for the holy grail

He was a man, fair and wan
Who drove a fully laden rental van
His denture dancing in a rusty can
Because the fixer was spent.

So on and on and on he went
with nothing on but a smile at best
Until a maid who thought he be heaven sent
Felt the heart beat within her chest
 
In the quest for love in mortal shell
Criminals die and go to hell
Suppressed by remorse, it'll never fail
He looked and he searched, for the holy grail

He was a man, fair and wan
Who drove a fully laden rental van
His denture dancing in a rusty can
Because the fixer was spent.

So on and on and on he went
with nothing on but a smile at best
Until a maid who thought he be heaven sent
Felt the heart beat within her chest

So tempting fate, she tried to tame
the beast within his soul
 
In the quest for love in mortal shell
Criminals die and go to hell
Suppressed by remorse, it'll never fail
He looked and he searched, for the holy grail

He was a man, fair and wan
Who drove a fully laden rental van
His denture dancing in a rusty can
Because the fixer was spent.

So on and on and on he went
with nothing on but a smile at best
Until a maid who thought he be heaven sent
Felt the heart beat within her chest

So tempting fate, she tried to tame
the beast within his soul
An attribute she couldn't name
But she was sure he was a Pole.
 

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