Poetry Game

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    I'll start on the next thread. But try to match rythym and rhyme, line for line, one line at a time. Add the full text of the poem in the thread above you and add your line to the bottom. Hell, don't rhyme if you don't want too. Just put your creative self into it. Next thread here goes.
     
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    In the quest for love in mortal shell
     
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    In the quest for love in mortal shell
    Criminals die and go to hell
    Suppressed by remorse, it'll never fail
     
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    In the quest for love in mortal shell
    Criminals die and go to hell
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    He looked and he searched, for the holy grail

    He was a man, fair and wan
     
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    In the quest for love in mortal shell
    Criminals die and go to hell
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    He looked and he searched, for the holy grail

    He was a man, fair and wan
    Who drove a fully laden rental van
     
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    In the quest for love in mortal shell
    Criminals die and go to hell
    Suppressed by remorse, it'll never fail
    He looked and he searched, for the holy grail

    He was a man, fair and wan
    Who drove a fully laden rental van
    His denture dancing in a rusty can
     
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    In the quest for love in mortal shell
    Criminals die and go to hell
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    He looked and he searched, for the holy grail

    He was a man, fair and wan
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    His denture dancing in a rusty can
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    In the quest for love in mortal shell
    Criminals die and go to hell
    Suppressed by remorse, it'll never fail
    He looked and he searched, for the holy grail

    He was a man, fair and wan
    Who drove a fully laden rental van
    His denture dancing in a rusty can
    Because the fixer was spent.

    So on and on and on he went
    with nothing on but a smile at best
     
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    In the quest for love in mortal shell
    Criminals die and go to hell
    Suppressed by remorse, it'll never fail
    He looked and he searched, for the holy grail

    He was a man, fair and wan
    Who drove a fully laden rental van
    His denture dancing in a rusty can
    Because the fixer was spent.

    So on and on and on he went
    with nothing on but a smile at best
    Until a maid who thought he be heaven sent
    Felt the heart beat within her chest
     
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    In the quest for love in mortal shell
    Criminals die and go to hell
    Suppressed by remorse, it'll never fail
    He looked and he searched, for the holy grail

    He was a man, fair and wan
    Who drove a fully laden rental van
    His denture dancing in a rusty can
    Because the fixer was spent.

    So on and on and on he went
    with nothing on but a smile at best
    Until a maid who thought he be heaven sent
    Felt the heart beat within her chest

    So tempting fate, she tried to tame
    the beast within his soul
     
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    In the quest for love in mortal shell
    Criminals die and go to hell
    Suppressed by remorse, it'll never fail
    He looked and he searched, for the holy grail

    He was a man, fair and wan
    Who drove a fully laden rental van
    His denture dancing in a rusty can
    Because the fixer was spent.

    So on and on and on he went
    with nothing on but a smile at best
    Until a maid who thought he be heaven sent
    Felt the heart beat within her chest

    So tempting fate, she tried to tame
    the beast within his soul
    An attribute she couldn't name
    But she was sure he was a Pole.
     

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