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  1. skiboarder72

    skiboarder72 No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Shot this the other night with my sigma 70-300mm, let me know what you think, its a little artsy but i think i like it

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    Cool shot.

    I think playing with the perspective in PS would be something to try, and cropping in from the left. Let me know if it's okay to post an edit to show you what I mean.
     
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    skiboarder72 No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    yea knock yourself out
     
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    Arch Damn You! Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Yea that is a cool shot, i like the contrast from natural colours to a kind of clinical green. Interesting to see what mark has in mind. :thumbup:
     
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    I boosted the contrast using curves, because after the crop it looked a little pale. All of the lines aren't perfect, but all that takes is some time actually measuring.

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    I like the crop better. Also I think that the blue light in the stair well really make the picture in contrast to the red sandstone.

    -Fiona
     
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    i think lose the tree. It's neither in nor out the frame and it's a bit distracting (for me anyway). Other than that i like it
     
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    I totaly agree.. Photoshop that tree out and its pure genious! A very striking image graphically. Strong colours. My first thought "cool shot!"

    I LOVE IT

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