portfolio shoot

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  1. BOUNCE!

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    what does anyone think about this shot. It was my first 'play' with digital effects. let me know[​IMG]

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    I would say on the 1st one to blur the lighting effects more and lower the opacity so it looks more natural.

    Otherwise, very nice.

    Love the 2nd one.
     
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    Not a big fan of the post processing on #1 but #2 is very well done, good work!
     
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    #1 isn't very flattering to the model at all. Her head looks all stretched. Also, you've lost the definition of the edge of her blouse. :)

    I'm having problems seeing the full image all together on my little monitor, so I can't get the full effect. Can you provide a smaller version?
     
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    I have a feeling that she has some really amazing eyes, I would tend to empasize those over the lips. If you happen to do this, please post I would be very curious to see the results.
     
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    I don't really like how pale the model looks in #1. However, I LOVE what you did with #2. She looks amazing in that photo.
     
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    Hi sarah, yes you are right she does have amazing eyes and I'll go thru' my shoot to post some different shots to you. For this shot however, I really wanted to try a kind of 'pop art' kind of look, thats why the effect is so dramatic and the lips are emphasised on the pale face. This is not a shot I would try and sell to a client it was just a different look I was playing with and I was curious to know other peoples thoughts. Thanks so much for your feedback. Again I'll post some different shots of her soon. :lovey:
     

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