Portfolio

Artemis · Mar 28, 2005

Oki...im making a portfolio for that photographer im gonna do work experience together, so im making it mainly aimd at their work.

They work with animals and people I think, aswell as children...and they have this habit of including black and white and colour into images, so ive included a few.

Id like any help you can offer me on making my portfolio...and ill post the images that ive included.

Artemis · Mar 28, 2005

Just to add, if there are any other pictures you have seen of mine that you like...please let me know if you think i should add them...

KevinR · Mar 28, 2005

IMHO, I wouldn't put the sunset pic in. Doesn't really go with the theme of the other shots.

Artemis · Mar 28, 2005

Good point...

Andrea K · Mar 28, 2005

i dont no if you could use it but i like the tractor picture you posted awhile ago, i think thats what it was...had nice color in it

lazarus219 · Mar 29, 2005

i like all the shots, the sunset dosent go with the others but does show another kind of photo that you are good at (it is a great pic) i dont like the boxing photo much though seems alot like a snapshot, the first dog photo is great, i like the slective coloring and on the last ?juggling? photo his hand is blown out, thats my only problems with any of the photos,

Artemis · Mar 29, 2005

Well...the boxing one I left in to show my work with Chris Eubank, andthe juggling one was another colour and black and white one...but I can take it out of you think.

Ill find the tractor one and place it in, thanks for the held andreag5!

Artemis · Mar 29, 2005

New addition to my portfolio!

Artemis · Mar 29, 2005

I hate to spam (Lies) but I need your help...please if you could help moi

terri · Mar 29, 2005

Hi Arty - you know, I'd really like that juggling shot if it weren't for the placement of the falling orange - I had to really look before I saw it, and the subject seemed awkward in those few seconds before I figured out what he was doing. Another one with an orange higher in the air would be a big improvement on a clever idea.

I like all your animal shots - they look very good. I am not a fan of the selective coloring, but this one's cute, with the dog and his toy.

I also like the subway shot you've added.

I don't remember the tractor shot, sorry - :blushing: - but it appears you have some fans of it, so I'd definitely include it in something this important! Good luck with this!! :thumbup:

Artemis · Mar 29, 2005

terri said:
Hi Arty - you know, I'd really like that juggling shot if it weren't for the placement of the falling orange - I had to really look before I saw it, and the subject seemed awkward in those few seconds before I figured out what he was doing. Another one with an orange higher in the air would be a big improvement on a clever idea.

I like all your animal shots - they look very good. I am not a fan of the selective coloring, but this one's cute, with the dog and his toy. I also like the subway shot you've added.

I don't remember the tractor shot, sorry - :blushing: - but it appears you have some fans of it, so I'd definitely include it in something this important! Good luck with this!! :thumbup:

Thanks for the great advice Terri, as usual, I can trust your advice and totally understand and respect it...so I am gonna try and attempt another juggling photo, along with getting that tractor pic in, thanks to andrea's advice

Artemis · Mar 30, 2005

Right, heres the latest update.

This is the pic Andrea was talking about...or maybe he ment the cropped one im not sure...

And heres what ive added to my portfolio...

My mum, with a bit of photoshop (not saying she needs it though)

A picture im partcularly proud of

aghastpumpkin · Mar 30, 2005

The one of your mum is flattering for you and her and you will both like it to share between you.
But to be critical, I think the subject is too tight in the frame.
Your others, as always, my good friend, are brilliant. Well done.
See you on tuesday, though please, don't bring your camera equipment then! It'll get trashed mate!

Keep up your great work, I have no more to say.
What else is there to say?

Andrea K · Mar 30, 2005

Artemis said:
Right, heres the latest update.

This is the pic Andrea was talking about...or maybe he ment the cropped one im not sure...

And heres what ive added to my portfolio...

My mum, with a bit of photoshop (not saying she needs it though)

A picture im partcularly proud of using photoshop

firstly im a girl

and secondly, i was talking about the cropped one but i like this tractor one as well

Artemis · Mar 30, 2005

I do apologise whole hartedly, I didnt realise and im sorry.

And the cropped one I looked at...but its rather unfocused and would require extensive sharpening in photoshop, creating unwanted grain