PORTRAIT C&C PLEASE!

WexWeb

TPF Noob!
Joined
Mar 5, 2010
Messages
33
Reaction score
0
Location
New York
Website
www.davewexler.com
Can others edit my Photos
Photos NOT OK to edit
C&C is appreciated...

AG.jpg
 
His shirt is clipped. Ceneted comp makes it feel like a mug shot.
 
Yep, what Jimmy said ... shirt's blown out on back shoulder, would like to see more head tilt ... needs a better facial expression too ... he looks like he's just "there" ... I don't have any connection with him ... needs to close his lips, maybe purse them together ... needs to look MEANER for that 20's & 30's gangster look ...
 
same subject - different look - you choose which one you like better - C&C PLEASE.. much appreciated!

MINI-ANT-21_filtered.jpg
 
#2 is better IMO. I like the expression more as well.
BTW, I will have to join your guitar forum! :thumbup:
 
I like #2 better. #1 is a good shot except for the blown out shoulder and his expression could be tweaked a little. #2 looks really good in B&W and his expression is better that time.
 
IMO it needs more flaw on his skin. I apologize if his skin was untouched.
 
Sigh... Why do people bump threads like this?
 
dont like 1. looks plasticy. 2 is really good.
 

Most reactions

New Topics

Back
Top