PORTRAIT C&C PLEASE!

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  1. WexWeb

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    C&C is appreciated...

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    I REALLY like it! Has a feel from like the 40's or something!
     
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    His shirt is clipped. Ceneted comp makes it feel like a mug shot.
     
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    Yep, what Jimmy said ... shirt's blown out on back shoulder, would like to see more head tilt ... needs a better facial expression too ... he looks like he's just "there" ... I don't have any connection with him ... needs to close his lips, maybe purse them together ... needs to look MEANER for that 20's & 30's gangster look ...
     
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    Good job!!
     
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    same subject - different look - you choose which one you like better - C&C PLEASE.. much appreciated!

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    #2 is better IMO. I like the expression more as well.
    BTW, I will have to join your guitar forum! :thumbup:
     
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    Thanks! and yes, please come by and register with Fenderpick Beatles :D
     
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    I like #2 better. #1 is a good shot except for the blown out shoulder and his expression could be tweaked a little. #2 looks really good in B&W and his expression is better that time.
     
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    IMO it needs more flaw on his skin. I apologize if his skin was untouched.
     
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    this thread is more than a year old ;)
     
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    Sigh... Why do people bump threads like this?
     

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